2011年10月16日日曜日
Blogging Assignment 5
My topic for the Essay 2 is prenatal diagnosis and abortion. I want to pursue what the true happiness for people is through this topic. It is true that some mothers have an abortion when they are informed of a fetal disease through prenatal diagnosis. However, children with diseases also have the right to be born as well as other healthy children. In reality, though, there are many mothers having difficulties bringing up their children for many reasons, for example, monetary problems. Therefore, it is hard to say whether it is good for those mothers to bear their children or not, since bearing their children might lower the quality of the mothers' life. My thesis statement so far is "Abortion caused by fetal disease is unacceptable except in particular situations: those that might lower the quality of mothers' life."
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You have a clear and unambiguous claim to use as the heart of your thesis. Now, you need to develop three reasons why you think this is true, three supporting points to be discussed in the body paragraphs. Please continue your research, thinking and outlining.
返信削除I understand that people want their child to be born health and be able to live a healthy life because being born with diseases is hard to live and cope with.
返信削除However, i feel that being born with a disease is natural and is like fate of a person. Thus, we should not get rid of the fact that people can be born with diseases.
Also, abortion can be referred as killing in a sense so i feel that abortion is unethical too. But i understand the fact that there are exceptions as not being able to do abortion may create more worse problems for others.
ahh, i hope i didnt make your topic more complicated...;;
It's better for you to make more supporting points.
返信削除I thought your thesis statement need some supporting points so that it would be clear to understand what is on the essay.
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